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Why did you give a negative review, since you don't like the anime itself, instead of the fanfic?

I know it's been a while since your comment, but seriously? Copy AKIKAN? Akikan keeps taking a lot of Chinese history, steals ideas, and doesn't give any credit (yes and I even went to confirm it) and you still say that this author copies him? Furthermore, this is more of a genre/concept of a story than a story itself. It's like you accuse Konosuba of copying Re:zero's idea just because they are both isekais. Your comment was one of the most bizarre I've ever seen on this site '-'

I'm not going to read your other comments, I'm just saying that the beginning said by you: ''LGBTQ everywhere nowadays.....miss the old times where these abnormal people don't exist'' If this isn't prejudice you've already shown, then I don't know what prejudice is... Furthermore, I find it amusing that your pathetic attempt to say: ''I have gay friends'', ''That's my freedom of expression'' I don't know if you know, but when FREEDOM OF EXPRESSION aims to take away other people's rights, or is intended to offend them, it can be considered hate speech (if you know what it is) Anyway, I'm not going to try to argue with someone like you, just let it be said that you have been reported, and I hope that others have reported you too

I only saw today that in the part of ''but is that a reason for me to give a positive review?'' it was actually supposed to be a negative review And about ''I don't know if there will be a harem, but so far some of the ''main girls'' are already starting to dislike him already)'' It was supposed to be liking him - In other words, I typed it wrong and I just came to correct it here, I apologize to anyone who got confused And just saying that I gave it another chance and read it again and in the end I was right in what I said, but I want to highlight my point of view that the relationship would harm the story and that it was the opinion that I had the most doubts about, But from what I read, it really ruined the story in my opinion.

Copied the story from: Meddling Giant -''CloudNineStories'' Do I have anything more to say? 1 Star just because the site doesn't allow me to put 0 stars... Maybe you'll delete my comment like another user I saw on your story, but we'll see...

Sorry for my horrible English, but I hope it's at least readable for whoever reads this future analysis... And well, if you're hoping for a story in which both the protagonist's way of thinking and the world itself are serious and its consequences, unfortunately this story should not be for you. Really, the writing, the world of Danmachi, the central idea is awesome (even if it's an overpowering power) the problem is that it doesn't make sense for him to say he's going to hide this power, and magically the Loki family appears in the Dungeon and he beyond to help them, show MANY of their powers. Like, couldn't you have waited a little and focused on him adapting in Orario, and simply talking to some characters and simple things for the readers to adapt and then ONLY THEN start showing his powers to others? I believe that this initial interaction will ruin all future work, because in addition to everyone knowing his level now, probably as various rumors will be spread, there is no way to have a normal interaction again without it seeming forced (with people he will know). . Anyway, about the aspect of him being the strongest or anything like that, I have no problems because I expected that from the beginning in this story, it just makes me angry how lightly both his powers and the people of Danmachi are taken, or you're going to tell me that in the MIDDLE OF THE LOKI FAMILY CAMP IN THE DUNGEON, he says he's better than everyone, contradicts the captain, beats everyone, makes the monsters in the dungeon look like plastic dolls and is taken as if it were normal (A The way they react initially makes sense, the problem is that soon everyone accepts and then he shows more strength and they open their mouths again, and then they accept). I seriously think that if this work was remade in a more serious way overall and slower it would be much better than it is currently (personal opinion). So far I can understand that I didn't like the aspects above, but is that a reason for me to give a positive review? It depends on your point of view, but honestly I'm more so because of how the girls are liking him so easily (I don't know if there will be a harem, but so far some of the ''main girls'' are already starting to dislike him already) , like Tiona even goes, but Ais? Why make him almost committed to both? If it's just the two of them, you can develop this ''relationship'', but if there is a harem (apparently there will be) it will be another story that will be ruined by the harem. This romance thing will probably limit the story a lot, especially now that it's at the beginning and he's committed to TWO GIRLS... (Is there a way to exchange me with him? ahahah)-----Honestly, this is a real concern-- ---- I hope my ideas weren't confusing, as I'm just typing what I'm thinking and not analyzing much of what I'm saying. Anyway, the story is for those who don't care so much about inconsistencies and accept things lightly (I think I should start doing that too ahahah), unfortunately I'm not like that and I'm giving my opinion and I'm about to share them with you. Thank you for ''listening'' to me so far :)

Bro I will tell you some of my personal frustrations, as well as I won't mind if my comment displeases some fans of Akikan's work, but this story made me so angry that I wanted to comment on it and give a review about it.. (sorry if my spelling is incorrect, as I can't speak English :-; ). Okay, let's start this story, a basic concept presented by several other authors, but because it's basic it's not bad, but what the author will do with it throughout the entire work and I can even say that I liked it at first, to the point of I comment on the chapters and give ''Power Stone''. (I had already seen other Akikan stories and thought he really had an interesting creativity, until I found out that in this story he practically took the plot of another story from China and created on top of it without even giving the least credit on the page fanfic's initial '-' ) Another thing I found interesting is that there are several fanfics with this theme where it brings together several romance and school life animes in the same world, but I realized that they are all very similar from the writing and even the story, however Akikan can diversify from these others... But something that let me down is the main character's lack of charisma and even how all the girls fall in love with him for simple silly reasons, as well as his lack of the overall background. This work simply arrived at a point where Shishio gained some skill thanks to one of his girlfriends and was in this vicious cycle where it would be like this: Girl= Potential for some skill= Will become Shisio's girlfriend= Shishio becomes richer, stronger, handsome...= more girls. Oh really? Like I think I've advanced a little in the criticism, so let's go back a little... Shishio wins a system gets girls and that's it? Honestly, I don't even know where to start criticizing, apart from the fact that I think other readers would like to see the main character having more characteristics without being a perfect guy (I'm pretty sure that if you have someone with the patience to read all this, at least least must have several flaws. For example just reading all this LOL :)... _) I would like more if it detailed the world itself, showing clearly about what surrounds it and even something simpler like the characteristics of the girls where it really had the minimum of focus and it wasn't just several girls wanting the attention of the main character. A long-term problem of the work would also be this HUGE money and INCREDIBLE skills, like I really want to see this author succeed in the future to make people not get tired of seeing the protagonist manage to do everything and have everything at his disposal. Speaking of which, something that is seriously lacking in these stories is having some event in the story that is interesting no matter how small (other than Shishio picking up girls and GG), as well as having some ''problems'' that the main character has to face. If we are going to see every story considered good, it has some characteristics in common and one of them is that not everything goes right momentarily for the protagonist and in this work apparently it will be ''Gary Stu in the world of romance and school life anime''. Sorry if my review was bad, I just typed and went :)