Might be a little too fast with the politics of the story but if you threw a few level grinding episodes between major events, helping other guild members level up, or even making new friends! That would help fill the story out and add some interest to leveling up or monsters in the world
/// Authors thoughts : Guys i genuinely need feedback about the pace at which my story is progressing .... are you all satisfied with my story progression ? is it too fast or too slow? ///
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
" Way to go... soo happy for you ;)" .
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
"My mother said girlfriends are for cheeky guys," said Han Sen without shame.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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Han Sen saw that at the bottom of the cave, a black pangolin-like creature more than six feet long with its whole body covered with in crystal scales was drinking water from a pool.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Beat the guy up so much he changed names...
On the ground, Kylee stirred.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga