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3yr
Commented I liked how the writer opened his/her story with the character's rollercoaster ride of nightmarish suffering only to top it off with a calm-after-the-storm vibe. Some minor grammar lapses here and there but this didn't undermine how the writer displayed the character's struggle along with the story. Two thumbs up and keep up the good work.
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Apotheosis.
Fantasy · GrotesqueIce
I like how the writer describes the emotions and inner thoughts of each character in fine detail, but I am looking forward to see more of the story's worldbuilding. While I've noticed minor grammar lapses in some chapters, I don't think it heavily impacted the way the story unfolds. The cherry on top in this novel is that the writer regularly posts updates, making sure that readers have their daily dose of the story.
Apotheosis.
Fantasy · GrotesqueIce