Yep. ORV (Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint) Hey, I clicked on your account (hoping to find out if you are an ORV fan) and I saw that you read a lot of books. So would you read mine, if it's possible...?
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The story is really interesting and captivating! I liked how you described every little detail and how you did your best to make readers understand the timelines. The plot is really intriguing and I hope you keep writing this great work author!
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So many characters... Now who is Kevin's father!
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I think I get it (though I may be wrong) In the first chapter I get that Nilos have a daughter named Jasmine (I haven't discovered his wife yet), And Jasmine must have been a little girl at that time. Henry and Rose are married. Orion had a pregnant wife who was injured, which isn't introduced yet. And after a generation has passed Jasmine (Nilos' daughter) has a daughter and that's Jessica. Am I right..?
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"I'll fuck you anyway, until you scream like crazy."
Teen 路 Rock_writer
Your story is really great author. You expressed the characters' emotions and the dreadful scenes in the first chapter very alluringly. I like your writing style and I hope you'll keep writing like this. And the plot seems promising too. Keep it up!
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As Damian's outburst echoed, Seraphine couldn't help but feel a surge of indignation. "Animal you said... I'm the same species as you, you idiot," she silently retorted in her mind, her thoughts tinged with defiance.
Fantasy 路 NewbieJimjim
You have such a great talent for choosing words. I was mesmerised by the way you write. And the plot is thick and interesting. I hope you keep on writing author!
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These lines are similar to the Epic Mahabharata
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I commented only after thinking About Narsimha and Prahlad's father. Or even Bhishma from Mahabharata.