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I was pointing out errors, of course what I wrote is wrong. They are errors. I don't care much about grammatical mistakes but numerical ones I think should be called out.

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

9100/900 = 9 quick maths ;) also 90800 kg/m^3 = nearly 91 kg/m^3

So far one of the best stories I have read on here, the MC is cold and badass without passing the line to being edgy. From the dozens of status-stories I know this is the first one where the author puts in a lot of effort to make the MC's status enjoyable for the reader to look at, big plus for me. The story itself progresses rather slowly and with a lot of detail but manages to stay exciting due to the excellent writing. The English is also pretty good, the only real mistake I noticed often is the use of 'himself' instead of 'herself' (when female) and 'you was' instead of 'you were'. Overall a very entertaining read, keep it up! :)