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The character design of all characters in this novel is hinged on disguising as another character no one appears as themselves, the writing tries to imply it in a comedic tone but most of it is just cringe. Unnecessary delays in the plot while repeating stupid details incessantly. Author tries building suspense but its like the attempt of a little child who has just been introduced to what suspense is. no potential for garnering long standing readership.

the fillers are horrible the translation is headache inducing and so many gaps in the behavior of the protagonist with relation to own abilities and situation shocked by stuff you were told was going to happen and what not. infuriating waste of time only a rather catchy start that's all

there is no relevant world information provided nor is there any cultivation explanation, professions are mentioned for the first time saying its his third profession. The only saving grace of the story is the concept but everything else be it continuity, grammar, and even story progress feels like the ramblings of a 5 year old recounting the story told to him at bedtime to his friends. Though its cute when a child does it but not here.

the start of the story was very fast paced and nicely detailed but somehow the author(or translater) isnt keeping track of the cultivating system often mixing up realms when describing the growth to a point where it doesnt even make sense also the recent chapters dont make any sense at all since apparently the character skills and abilities have all been tossed away just to make the current arc everything after ch 480 is filler imo and often has me wanting to throw my phone out of a window if you want to make thrilling situation atleast remember to adhere to the characters abilities otherwise whats the point of writing a story about an mc if his own abilities are conveniently forgotten the dragon breeding center has only been used twice despite the mc having transcended once and both happened in the lowest level then this dude with supposed life laws and spring of life is paralyzed and despairing over it even if he cant enter the dragon space why cant he summon his life dragon to heal himself or ice dragon to help traverse the freezing abyss so many holes in the plot just to add another female characters which is completely unnecessary by the characters standard. the system is barely mentioned. ps i loved the story till so many plot holes started appearing in the last 70 chapters or so. also let me remind you godfrey is a soul who can enter Joelson's body then why would he get separated while wasting energy in the abyss so much makes no sense at all now. i hope the story gets back to how it originally was *sigh*. or if there is some larger plot hole to explain the gradually decreasing intelligence of mc in the story then forget my complaints.(doubt it though)

the story drags events worthy of one or two chapters into almost 50 or 60 the concept of the story is fine but the mc has no real essence or personality and doesnt really bring forth any connection that could join me as reader with the protagonist. conversations between characters have been added in abrupt places which really mess with the flow of the story. many subsequent chapters feel like they should have been released the prior ones as atleast chronological order would be maintained. the system on the other hand is definitely a cool concept. i would recommend this novel if it stopped going round and round in circles in some parts and then speeding unreasonably in others. it often feels like some chapters were added just to repeat what happened in the previous chapter. i dont think anyone wants a summary of the previous chapter in the current one. in comparison other system novels on here are far better written.