Webnovel Author: THORN - Novel Collection

Although the fanfic only has 16 chapters, I'm already feeling like it's been quite a journey since MC transferred his memory to his past self. I didn't really see any grammar mistakes throughout the story. The actions of the characters are well justified albeit there are some plot holes visible. I'll still give this 5 stars since it's a unique story that will obviously be attractive to readers who like stereotype villain MCs.

Really good. I don't really know how to describe it since there's no such outlier in this whole fanfic. Characters have appropriate personalities. Writing quality is rough for a few chapters but smoothens out around chapter 7. Hiruzen is an actual good guy who's willing to protect innocents rather than a good old manipulator. Danzo is as usual. Minato was sidelined after the first few chapters since the show is about MC, not him. He's just there to follow MC like a sidekick in future chapters. All in all, a nice naruto fanfic with average potential to be in rank 10. Readers should read it casually not minding the mistakes since the author is still on his craft lol. I'll give it 5 stars to show my support.

I would be okay with him helping people who are 'good'(to him). We should all go by a golden rule. "Be like a mirror."

From what I read, It's not really that bad as a fanfiction novel. Pretty funny at first but I dropped cause my patience ran out seeing MC acting like women are toys. I'm not some simp who's worshipping women but I just didn't like the way he's acting. Also, the guy keeps ignoring a girl who has a crush on him because it's INTERESTING. The author said MC is not evil but I don't see it. He could have just rejected her straight and done with it or take her in the harem but no. He's just acting like a stupid mother*cker who's annoyed of beautiful girls liking him. In conclusion, If any of you like a protagonist who acts like issei but in reality just a crazy jerk. This is your novel. Also warning, MC likes to get beaten by his women. He got that fetish from his parents who beat him up when he was young. Well, he's not that bad. The guy's supporting a sister who doesn't like him because he killed people who were trying to r*pe her.