Badges 2
Moments 8
Lmao you're praising yourself!
"Yeah you! What's wrong?" Wrath acknowledged a handsome black-haired kid who had raised his hand. Of course, the handsome kid was me, the one and only. "Does a familiar count as a member?" I asked. Wrath quickly gazed over all of them, counting them one by one. "Well, since there are only 27 trainees here, you could go ahead and do exactly that," Wrath accepted. I bowed and turned around to face my team mates. I wore an evil grin on my face, and so did the others. Blitz had the same face, which was contrasting his usual cute and round face.
My Journey As A Demi-Human
Fantasy · FlamingDJay
Oh my gosh! It's fantastic. It's wonderful! You have described this very well. I like how you have presented it.
ch 25 Chapter 25: Heaven-Defying Luck (*O*)
My Journey As A Demi-Human
Fantasy · FlamingDJay
Ayo!!!! I like this line," Thread lightly Orsino, that's my sister. " That's all I wanna say 😂
"So, what're you going to do until the next training session? I suggest you rest," Orsino suggested. "Oh no, I'm going to hatch this egg," I said as if it was matter-of-fact. "You're still on that? You really should give up on that," Orsino commented. "Hehe, he's not the type of guy that quits that easily," I heard someone say. Of course, I can't forget that voice. It's the voice of my little sister, Lavender! "A human? What are you doing here?" Orsino harshly replied. "Thread lightly Orsino, that's my sister," I sternly advise. "Your sister? Wait, don't tell me you're the other type of demi-demon, the one that goes all insane!" Orsino exclaimed. "Well, yeah, I am the type of demi-demon that might go insane," I calmly stated.
My Journey As A Demi-Human
Fantasy · FlamingDJay
Well tbh I really appreciate your efforts in this chapter ! I am really amazed by your writing skills. Also like how do you describe things so nicely ? Well now I want next chapter because now I am curious soo... I need NEXT CHAPTER! Well there's no pressure ! Take your time ! Ig every thing is perfect ! Ahhhh also I found this chapter interesting ! Keep it up ! I see you've improved from last time!
ch 21 Chapter 21: There really is no such thing as a free lunch
My Journey As A Demi-Human
Fantasy · FlamingDJay
I really like the story ! It's an awesome starting ! Well I will vote you with power stone ! I have question like what is Yakuza ? I don't think you've give small intro to it ! Well I like your story ! Keep it up !
ch 0 1 First Day of School
The American Transfer Student
Realistic · RicardoDiaz14
Jay ! Here's your feedback of ch 3 - 1. The story was good and awesome 2. I found it funny !? idk why but I found ch 3 funny and I found funny about the interview one 😂 3. The flow of story is well maintained . 4. Easy words are used ! So reader can understand :) 5. The story is damn awesome that leaves your mind an curious question :)
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Don't think this will end well...
My Journey As A Demi-Human
Fantasy · FlamingDJay
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I enjoyed each chapter thoroughly! It was great and I am so proud of you!
ch 30 Chapter 29: Wrath's Backstory
My Journey As A Demi-Human
Fantasy · FlamingDJay