This doesn't make sense, last chapter he lost his parents at 12 and 3 years has passed since he got stronger. You're telling me this guy didn't have a basic outline on wat to do even without the drive. BTW u said he has eidetic memory, why does he need that drive, unless ur telling me he wrote all dc info on it which 1. would be really stupid for a genius 2. if it was some hacking software i'm sure he can make it in DC. Also he didn't bring clothes/money? Seriously its not like he was transported there. There is alot of flaws, I think you need to make an outline on wat u want in ur story before it starts to contradict itself.
Anyway my research finds me a lot of interesting information but there's not much I can act on right now and I have nothing else to do. I should have prepared better, but my decision to come here was an impulse out of rage and confusion and I only had the memory card and the memory stick with me. This will teach me to control my emotions better in the future.
Anime & Comics · DragonField
I think this part of your world building needs a revamp. So far so good as far as the "rules" for this world but it doesn't make sense that everyone assumes if you're not official so you are more or less a criminal. Majority I would assume is low - middle class just like the real world, so they literally know what it's like to want a better life but not have the necessary resource. I doubt they would openly scorn others just like them, some maybe but not enough where you enter random towns and people are eyeing you like some sort of felon
ch 32 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 32
Anime & Comics · alex02373
I see, I might re-read to see on the foreshadowing then, good luck finishing the rest. Can't wait!
Swallowing The Spider
Anime & Comics · DragonField