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Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Despite the author's grammar not being the best, the chapters remain understandable for the most part. Good job on the pacing as it is consistent. As such, I have no complaints there. Character and world development are well fleshed out with nothing extra. Again, overall, it's a decent read with nothing much to say other than a job well done by the author.
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Replied to Linda_Vermillion I meant chapter 17. Not 19.
First of all, massive potential. Like, the amount of things that can be expanded upon regarding the world and the characters is simply amazing in itself.Chapters barely have, if not any, mistakes at all. The author is extremely well versed in describing things, which paints a perfect picture for readers such as myself to immerse themselves in. Characters actually feel alive for once! So much personality went into every single one of them; their dialogues, the way the author presents them is on another level of consideration. The only minor complaint that I have is, like the other reviewer mentioned, the stability of updates. Other than that, I'm pleasantly surprised as I've pretty much found a diamond in the rough. A gem just waiting to be polished in the future!
Path to Liberty: Thousand Year Conflict
Fantasy · Cythiano