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dont question it too much

Villain's Valor: A Noble Fantasy Resurrection

Fantasy · Roseiinthegarden

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it had potential.bummer that it had to end like this. But good choice honestly. theres no point in wasting hours of ur time without any payment. Good luck on your future endeavours.

ch 17 No future updates

Villain: I don

Fantasy · Daoistyglf7O

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"Ok, I'll be waiting," replied the girl, ending the call. She reveals herself as Chloe Sunshine, and her final words echo in the room: "Dean Carleone… You can fool others, but not me."

The Author’s Paradox

Fantasy · Superfabinho

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dudes missing out.

Man: "No, no deer. Deer run too fast. Hard to catch."

This Life As A 2nd Generation Villain

Urban · Spirit_Immortal

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id say that this one is a bit intriguing.Good writing quality and pretty decent mc. But you know it has some flaws. But i do enjoy the choice of weapon for the mc.Some of the characters make less sense than the others.A swordsman mc is common and all that but that sword being a greatsword in a novel of this type is new to me. Most of the time its either a one handed sword or a katana(cause people think katanas are cool and overuse it). But i am intrigued on how you will advance this type of mc.I'd also suggest improving the mc a bit(im talking about the personality not the power).Cause it feels a bit empty.Overall its been a good read up until now.

The Extra Awakening

Fantasy · Unknownducky

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Nah i prefer this version of her. The first version sounds way too cruel.

ch 33 EMILIA CLARKE(1)

Inside my favorite novel

Fantasy · CAESAR20

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i think it was the most mature action she could've taken. From my experience reporters are feral beasts waiting for you to let your guard down before they completely tarnish you. If she had'nt done this then in the future the reporters will become more daring and end up doing something stupid.

Was Scarlett's Speech a bit forced? I think it was but also, little necessary the way she spoke. What do you think? (⁠๑⁠•⁠﹏⁠•⁠)

Game's Villain; The World of the Anima

Fantasy · Ellucid_Dreams

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tftc

ch 21 Home

The Extra Wants Control

Fantasy · Kas73_

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the novel is good and all that but i have the same complain as everyone reading this novel.It's too short. It feels like i blonked and the chap ended.

ch 26 SWORD ABILITY(1)