Writing quality is good. There are only a few errors that don't really affect the flow of the story (like word choice or spelling). Story development doesn't feel rushed, but it also doesn't go to slow. It feels like there's progress every chapter. The characters are interesting, it's nice to see how their interactions with the mc gradually show the differences from who they were in the game. Although updates are pretty far apart, there's still at least one every month, so no complaining here. The world background is very intriguing, and with the newer chapters released, we're starting to get a look into some of its secrets, which is pretty cool. All in all, a much better novel than I was expecting, good stuff author. 馃憤
LGBT+ 路 Calamity95
Nvm, found the second book somewhere else, gonna go read it
LGBT+ 路 HollandWeathers
I'm not very good at writing reviews, but I just wanted to say that this story is severely underrated. I wasn't expecting much, but it was clear that the time put into this story paid off in the end. If you still decide to post it, I'm looking forward to book 2 of this series.
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Webnovel 
Writing quality is good. There are only a few errors that don't really affect the flow of the story (like word choice or spelling). Story development doesn't feel rushed, but it also doesn't go to slow. It feels like there's progress every chapter. The characters are interesting, it's nice to see how their interactions with the mc gradually show the differences from who they were in the game. Although updates are pretty far apart, there's still at least one every month, so no complaining here. The world background is very intriguing, and with the newer chapters released, we're starting to get a look into some of its secrets, which is pretty cool. All in all, a much better novel than I was expecting, good stuff author. 馃憤
Freedom's Heart
LGBT+ 路 Calamity95