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Bro this had like 50+ chapters before..................................................................................,........................

Good story intresting idea. The quality is also very good. Not too many httyd fics out there. Only prolem i have is there isnt more, time between updates.

even if you dont go back and fix old chapters just re read what u have written before posting. if you can get someone else to reread for u. they might catch mistakes you missed and help with syntax issue.

Good concept i like how u progress story. However the order of words in some areas seems abit unussual. Abit rough arouns the edges so to speak. But if u sort that out and continue with that u doing, it will be great.

Intresting story keep up the good work. I enjoy the concept and like your writing style. I am intrested in seeing how you progress this story. I just hope the updates are semi concistant l.