Webnovel Author: Ami_yaye - Novel Collection

The synopsis on its own piques curiosity and then the read, very good work author. A few editing here and there is needed with some misspelling but that's all. Waiting to see the story unfold more!

The book gives the details to the story sequentially. Everyone loves a good badass mafia story but perhaps author could be less detailed...? Getting to know the characters so well in the first chapters take the mysterious vibe away. Beautiful write up otherwise!

Not gonna lie not a fan of Asian stories in general so there was a bit of struggle with understanding terminology but you're such a good writer your descriptive wordings worked me through and as I got into the book I must say interesting piece you've got here. Good work!

Very mystic-y. At first I was confused but then realised as all mystery story go I shouldn't get everything on the spot it won't keep my interest for long if so. Very much felt like I was watching a movie. Awesome Author!

Just wanna say... Gr8 work! Loved it! Was ttly immensed in the dramatics. Characters really ran their emotions through. It can actually be a movie. Good work author!

The character intro great. Very descriptive with the scenes and interactions. Overall you know what your doing author 👏🏿 great job keep it up. Slow burn but great.

Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.

Duely noted.

You have a good story going on here can't lie. You've got a vision for your book and seem to know exactly where you want to take it to. Apart from the I's coming on more, all's good. Thank you for the read

Interesting work. It takes courage to write a scary story and thumbs up. Please pay attention to some of the dialogues that are missing quotations other than that you doing good!

The chapters follows sequentially. Descriptive. Certain details are brushed over which I'm temp confused over a bit then bounce back which can be good nd bad. In the good sense urging the reader to forge ahead for clarity overall the book has potential, diction is gr8, it's good.

Thank u

You have a good story line great concept and confident scenes.; the fights accurate descriptions attention to minuscule details. Absolute perfect timing introduction of the characters readers easily grasp what their behavior should be or would develop as the story progresses. Captivating and I love it!