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The reviews are fake they are only commmenting on this book. Don’t meet the mc until chapter 11 when you have to pay. If I could give this zero stars I would.

Thanks for the comment I just saw it.

I don’t write review really so don’t expect much. The story is fine but think that I don’t like in the novel is that the author keeps use “ he was cruel” or a variation of this in a middle of a sentence for no reason. In addition the novel they keep saying “what transpired” no one talks like this they could just say what happen. Other than this I don’t understand why the mc’s mentor/teacher hasn’t moved him to where he is I don’t think it’s stated in the but if it was can you tell me. Other than this thing everything is going fine in the novel. Smaller Review Writing Quality: The writing quality is fine except some time the author rewrites a sentence or grammar errors. Update stability: Can’t really say anything since I’v e been reading for two weeks but normally 7 chapters a week. Story development: The development is above average; we go to different places but nothing new or different. Don’t get that many new characters in the story would be okay if they had development. Character design: Not many descriptions of characters. World Background: The world background is average the Mc goes to different places but doesn’t go their again after that, would be fine because where going to a academy but where 200 chapters in and only been to like five other places other than his house. Does have room for development because we’re in a low grade city.