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An interesting story so far while things are slow going there are obvious hints to larger things. Although there isn’t much to read about him yet the main character is well written. Overall a sound story so far with a lot of potential I’m looking forward to reading more of this. Hope this is helpful have a good day.

Another great overlord fanfic created by these two. I was a little hesitant at first with the story focusing on a different supreme being instead of Ainz, but the warrior definitely fits the world a lot better and is written quite well. As always with these writer the writing itself is high quaity and easy to understand. I’m not sure where the story is going but I’m sure it will be great. A good choice for fans of overlord and a well written story Im looking forward to reading.

At the time of writing this there are only ten chapters, so far it is fairly interesting. Although it doesn’t have any particularly compelling qualities it is generally good. The author doesn’t seem particularly experienced but does have a lot of potential. I enjoy the focus on development of the town and I hope to see it remain a central component instead of a background development. While the characters do seem a little flat there is still some depth I hope to be explored.