GreedHunter - Profile

the author asked for feedback on what I read and I can say that it was written quite well, since I’ve been reading short stories or ff I’ve already stopped paying attention to grammar, it’s not so important if you’re a new writer, because the most important thing is the plot, here the plot is not bad, but unfortunately for me it is at the level of drama of Chinese short stories, as usual, everyone turned their backs on the main character and abandoned everyone and he decided to return to his former life and again become a withdrawn idiot so that in the end he would get a happy ending, I don’t I say that this is bad, this is the usual cliche with all the things that have to happen, plus the combination of incompatible plot and characters is not bad at all, and it is clear that the author wanted to correctly convey the very essence of the characters and their feelings about their loved ones and how they want to be close to them, but for me it’s not like I could read and wait for continuation, I read everything that was there and because I was drunk and I was bored, and yet I’m here and sharing my opinion, still in the same state, and yet I I believe that there will be people who will like it and they will decide to support the author in his endeavors, and I also wish the author good luck, peace:з

I read everything that was available at the moment, and I can say it’s not good but not bad either, it’s just an ordinary FF, the plot has been changed minimally,the sharingan and a little jutsu were just added, in the end I came for a plot where there will be revenge and in the end I get the original plot only with small additions, if you came because you thought that there will be a harem (no), there are hints but in the end Mc virgin, regarding the strength of the main character, then there is still the same weak mongrel who will gain strength for 100500 years just to get a small buff, regarding the harem (which does not exist yet) if you are waiting for your favorite waifu, then forget the author decided to follow the original plot, which will ultimately lead to the main character having a relationship many years later(well, or he will be a typical beta main character) when others around are already in relationships, it’s up to you to decide whether to read it or not, but I won’t waste time on this.I'm already tired of weak main characters who gain strength in tens of thousands of chapters so that they can eventually get punched in the face and repeat again

Can you link to where you can read it instead of waiting for the author to decide to translate it?