I’m form las. Vegas and you can shoot a tank if you want lol people have no idea how crazy Nevada is in general
"Fun? That's an understatement. If you're looking for entertainment, it can be found in Vegas in all forms. Gambling, drugs, sex, alcohol, machine guns, sporting events — you name it, Vegas has got it all. And so long as you have got the money to pay for it, you can experience everything in the span of a weekend."
Urban · Zentmeister
Author can’t take criticism don’t even try
"It seems things aren't that safe around here, Lington, bring Silver somewhere safe."
Anime & Comics · Abadom
Wow how convenient
"Ah? I forgot, does it matter?"
Anime & Comics · Abadom
So dumb
'He still had a lot of energy to spare, even if his Skill had long stopped and its side effects were draining him… He could still raise his fists and continue the fight..'
Anime & Comics · Abadom
What a dumb plot you’ve created
"He is just unconscious." Said Vultus as he cracked his neck and looked at the boy
Anime & Comics · Abadom
He keeps contradicting himself like what even is this?
"Is it time for me to retire from it? My fighting style does not suit such heavy armor."
Anime & Comics · Abadom
Stop adding different identities! It’s dumb and cringe
"... Are you alright?" Asked the white knight
Anime & Comics · Abadom
This changing armor randomly and hiding identity is cringe. I don’ understand what’ so appealing about it and his armor sucks just buy real armor if he can make 100k a day? Like what?
'Silver noticed a piece of white fabric strapped to the armor neck plates.'
Anime & Comics · Abadom
Dude please stop info dumping just get on with the story!
This world only had 4 Billion total world population.
Fantasy · Dreamer_LoneDevil
Great detail and convening of emotions it’s a sighn of deep emotional understanding from the author but It needs to be spaced out condensed drama means it loses its power when done like this
"*Sniff* I-I just wanted the rice not to burn *Sniff*" I spoke through tears, as I slowly curled into mom's embrace "B-but you *Sniff* just yelled at me without asking *Sniff* I don't like that, it makes me feel bad, really bad!"
Fantasy · Eroos
Its not even a antihero MC stuck In a rock and a hard place this is just edgy teen writing at this point. bad execution
The woman screamed in agony, but Tristan didn't even pay attention to her anymore. He proceeded to dash forward, passing her as he continued his way to the massive door.
Fantasy · Avan
Yes unless your a cuck
"Fun? That's an understatement. If you're looking for entertainment, it can be found in Vegas in all forms. Gambling, drugs, sex, alcohol, machine guns, sporting events — you name it, Vegas has got it all. And so long as you have got the money to pay for it, you can experience everything in the span of a weekend."
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister