Webnovel Author: Lola_Ben - Novel Collection

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This tory is simple and endearing. I love how the female lead adores animals. Just some editing is needed. Good work, author

Thank you so much for your review! 🤗

The descriptions are lovely. I love how the story progresses showing everything that needs to be shown at that point. Keep the good work up, dear writer. 🤗

Thank you, Favour 🙃❤️

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I like the progressions of the story. With some more editing, this story would be amazing. Keep it up. :)

A really lovely journey so far. I loved the imagery painted with words right from the beginning and I love the character interaction so far. Do keep updating . 🙃

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The whole matrix thing is intriguing. But you need to work on heavily editing your story. Try to break long paragraphs into smaller ones. And look into your grammar as well, it needs strong polishing. Other than that, your storyline is interesting and I wish you the best. 🙃

A little note for the author ... Please try as much as possible to watch out for punctuation and grammar errors. You can always do that later, but keep it in mind. 🙃❤️

This story is soooo cute. It is a fresh breath of air especially with the delightful friendship displayed in the story. Vienna and Leon's story is certainly going to be worth reading so I'll add this one to my library. 🙃❤️

The writing style in this book just makes the story flow so well, I couldn't help but wonder what would be happening next. The characters are built so well and descriptions are just amazing. This book is worth the read. ❤️

How do I put this... this story is one that just makes you smile no matter what. The teen vibe makes the story even more interesting. There are errors that need to be worked on, but nevertheless, the story is amazing to read. Keep it up Author ❤️