The start was great. Jiang Xicheng's introduction as the Dao Child is good. Let's see what he does further..
ch 0 1 Prologue: Beginning of history (1/2)
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
So, Jiang Xicheng's journey starts from here
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Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Nice name
When the basket carrying the infant arrived in the heavens, it had gone through a meteor shower and heavy thunderstorms still the infant managed to survive so lord Tan Ju named the infant Liwei, Jiang Liwei.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Why? Isn't Tan Ju the lord?
''Yes my lord, heavenly lord Peng Zhong must take the right decision''.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Aghh! Thats the volume name. So, this is where it came from
When the mortals watched this scene, they kowtowed and pleaded mercy. There was a meteor shower that night and the child was named Dao Child Diamond Meteor.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Beautifully explained.
One mountain was immediately transformed, the rocks and water glinting in a shower of diamond shards. The other mountain trembled under the weight of the magnitude, and the fog rose as the horizon burned - a sight of nature's unyielding power.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Great
The basket sailed down the river and cut through the deep, encompassing darkness that opened to the infinite sky. A fierce meteor shower descended on the two mountains, splitting the river of the pristine eclipse into two.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Noo poor child
The river of pristine eclipse flowed between the two mountains, a thousand feet tall mountains with strange rocks standing above them, and fog underneath, inhuman creatures rumoured to live there were famous for being the path between heaven and earth. And thus the child was cast in the River of Pristine eclipse.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Nice! Jiang Xicheng
''Every soul will taste death. And heavens test us with evil and with good as trial and to them shall this pure soul return as promised in his fate''.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Intresting
But in the fifteenth year, something peculiar happened.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
So why didn't he become the ruler?
Lord Peng Zhong was wise. He had spent centuries watching over the Earth and heaven, the immortals, the mortals, and their conspiracies. He knew it was a collaboration between a party that intended to have someone else as the next heavenly ruler.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
The grammar is top-notch
He had a dream wherein he was engulfed in flames and his kinfolk silently watching. This eerie dream left him perturbed and haunted, so he called out to the God of destiny to explain its meaning.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
So he is heavenly lord?
Fifteen hundred years ago, Tan Ju, a divine yet former human, soared above the heavenly realm, wielding his god-given power with righteous purpose. People recognized him as a demigod, a divine warrior, and beholden the great sword of Ethereal Phoenix in hand. He was the preserver of celestial order; wind, water, fire, light, and dark at his command.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Heavenly ruler!! You mean the God of heavens and Earth
Inscribed with a powerful enchantment, it was said to be bedewed with its master's blood and only a righteous heir would be able to unsheathe it. Such a chosen one would be anointed as a divine candidate and destined to become the next heavenly ruler.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
A sword explained so smoothly.
An ancient sword lay on a crimson altar, its blade shimmering with ichor - the blood of countless battles that had been fought in its name. Its honed edge exuded a menacing aura, gripping all who gazed upon it in fear.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
Nice start
''People are asleep while they are alive, but when they die they wake up''.
Eastern · jungkooks_luna
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 16 Prince Xiao is thrown out of team
History · jungkooks_luna
I came here to re-read the old chapters as I'm waiting desperately for new chaps. The usage of words here is marvelous
ch 0 1 You are such a dick, JianYu
History · jungkooks_luna
This is masterpiece
Alaric Genghis laughed scarcely, ''The truth would unveil, the lovers would meet again and the jade pendant would protect the consort prince''.
History · jungkooks_luna
Grave of Infatuations is a brilliant read. The novel describes Jiang Liwei’s captivating story starting from the very beginning of his origin - a foundling infant to his eventual ascension to nobility and leadership of two realms. It is a beautiful tale of courage, hope and determination as Jiang Liwei battles against fate and challenges destiny. Alongside, Jiang Liwei’s backbone of tenacity and resilience will drive readers to reconsider their own paths and also to strive hard for their goals. This novel is definitely an interesting read and I give it five stars! This story describes how beautifully literature could be molded.
Grave of infatuations: The odyssey of an autumn rose
Eastern · jungkooks_luna