I'm still a student but I bet that my life will be much more fruitful than yours ^_^ since I'm not trying to make fun of people :) and instead be a little helpful unlike some guys like you
When I say the huge being waved his hand I do mean fucking huge, the thing is easier bigger than a house and yet he managed to sneak up to the princess and tap her on the shoulder right under the nose of 50 adventures and 20 royal knights! The princess could have died today and none of us would have been able to stop it!
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go get a life and stop commenting stuff that other people won't care about馃槖馃槯
When I say the huge being waved his hand I do mean fucking huge, the thing is easier bigger than a house and yet he managed to sneak up to the princess and tap her on the shoulder right under the nose of 50 adventures and 20 royal knights! The princess could have died today and none of us would have been able to stop it!
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wow, you are so cool馃槖
Well not everyone left, it seems some others had similar ideas to be me including the princess. The princess said she wanted to stay here in Eden as Alice's friend and she wants to train to get stronger.
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i think this is better then dual cultivation
I like it hehe~
ch 61 Who is the real enemy
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I think it would be cooler if you used capitalization and wrote "Magic Tower". Thanks for reading hehe >_<
I walk outside the town hall and look to my left, there towering over the skyline is the "magic tower" with a large building next to it, probably the university.
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"others had similar ideas to be me including the princess." - WRONG! Correct! - "others had similar ideas, including me, as the princess", or if you want it to be better understood then say it like this - "others, including me, had the same idea as princess"!
Well not everyone left, it seems some others had similar ideas to be me including the princess. The princess said she wanted to stay here in Eden as Alice's friend and she wants to train to get stronger.
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" The thing is easier bigger than a house"... you mean "The thing is easily bigger than a house" right? Please use Grammarly, it's gonna correct these kinds of errors!
When I say the huge being waved his hand I do mean fucking huge, the thing is easier bigger than a house and yet he managed to sneak up to the princess and tap her on the shoulder right under the nose of 50 adventures and 20 royal knights! The princess could have died today and none of us would have been able to stop it!
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I recommend using Grammarly!
ch 0 1 Prologue
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I have to say. This chapter is full of grammatical errors. Sometimes it's even harder to get what you mean by some sentences. Please work harder on improving your grammar, from the short explanation you wrote for this novel, I really want to read this novel![img=recommend]
ch 0 1 Prologue
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Thank you!
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I thought it would be better to use capitalization on every word in Status, guess that isn't that good of an idea. Thank you, I'll remember it!
ch 0 1 To The "Gods' Training Grounds!"
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I like the panda!
I like first-person POV. Btw, nice grammar!
ch 0 1 Ocean?
The First Mage On Earth
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