If you decide to add romance early then as a suggestion wait until MC has entered the academy. Otherwise with the story progression as of now the way you’re building your story it’s pretty solid so far.
ch 52 Anyway this is a poll for readers
Fantasy · Xerzxes
Honestly between Summoner, Vampir, and this one they have a few similarities but the three have their own unique flow as in character development, world interaction, and a pretty good plot progression. So all the way to this point in my opinion stay with the flow because it’s been a great read!!!! And congrats for the contract✊
ch 53 Authors Question And Apology
Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
So far reading all the books you’ve released have been really good and hopefully this one will also be updated like the others!!! Keep up the great work!!!
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Honestly I think so far it’s been solid. Normally the mc does the picking but here it’s Tang Yin and it adds an interesting twist!
ch 146 +Please Give Me Your Opinion+
Eastern · JosieGan
That’s great to hear!
Will there be any continuation of this story or is it on a break? I really liked the eye system and the potential for the characters and hopping for more release of chapters!!!! Really looking to see how it progresses!!! ✊😎
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Draconian frost angel?
The Frost Dragon bloodline and angel bloodline had completely fused. Perhaps he could be called Frost Dragon Angel now?
Fantasy · Alexender
So far it’s been a great read, looking forward to more of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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As someone who enjoys reading, this novel so far has been jeeping my intrest. Always looking forward to wht happens next and if it helps this is the frist review I’ve done for a novel. Hopefully you feel better soon!✊
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Fantasy · Zontal_Zev
Overall the story is pretty solid. Looking forward to see how the world will expand and how the characters develop. Keep up the good work!
Reincarnated as a step-dad in a fantasy world
Fantasy · isli