Webnovel Author: ZeroMorningstar - Novel Collection

This seems like a very rushed story with no potential and not a lot of detail. The idea of the story is fantastic however we need more detail of the power and also his personality and him constantly wining and being known as All Might son seems like his personality

You have amazing potential my dude keep writing and adapting as a fellow author that is all I can say.

Dude give the character a bit more personality. Also please space out the sentences. Also I seen this story before I am gonna assume you are the author or asked permission but please flesh out the sentences and dialogue. Children from other pantheons is good but build up the history and background of these characters based on a version of said myth this story seems like a rushed copy and paste and could be better so please do so

Good start to a story and character is actually pretty smart. I like the concept and also the first two worlds are from great movies that have amazing powers and potential

Amazing potential from a amazing author that just wrote one of the best JJK books. Character personality was amazing and power potential is also amazing.

Amazing potential and a good subject in naruto people don’t touch up on which is being a sage. I hope you continue this story long term could be a amazing story

Amazing potential and could be the number one book if you don’t drop the book or give up in 5 chapters so please continue

I hope this story is yours because I saw it and read this before on fanfiction.net along with your other story please credit the author’s work if it is not yours and ask for permission

Amazing start and very good options also a lot a character potential and world building potential. Please continue

Amazing potential and could be a top story and be number one easily. Perfect character idea and power and perfect first chapter looking forward to this story please continue and don’t let others people hate affect the story

So this story has amazing potential. The character idea is amazing. Also his curse technique has amazing potential and the character personality seems to have a lot of potential

Sadly it will probably be another Patreon bait