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sorry if bad english like i say its my 3rd lang. anyway ill go with standard review first so dont mind... my thots at end writing quality- very good i think, i understand everything thats all i want updates: daily looks like it, very good story- its about emilia, a prince bodyguard killed then reborn as princess but betray by her lover & killed again (big sad) but now shes given a body by system and getting rdy to take revenge but hasnt forgotten self & also try to be happy very fun dialogue with everyone i like it chara- ok i think this is where the story rly shines. esp MC. amazing chara developonment i think mb the best i ever seen if u can keep it up full story world- idk tbh i never get this part in review what world idc its probs good my thots- when i read ur other story i already like it but like i say in there to me most imp is always the mc and EMILIA is awsum. i like her personality so much lol i think im more in it for emilia fun than the story but thta just me. i dont like that there r no nums in here bcs i rly liked all the nums in ur other story. i think they put lots of bricks to ur plot & make it stronger if the nums all make sense (only) ok done pls keep making good story best of lucks to emilia

updaaaaaaaaaate pls author im begging why u always do this to us i love ur story so much bro come on im watiing lots of ppl r waiting for u to update pls its so good pls update

ok thank u author im happy to know

im not good at writing reviews so pls bare with me i quite webnovel for a while after both the novel i was following got dropped. i like to read from when the story starts and read as it get updated slowly. i return and look for a good novel to start. those that look ok alr have too many chapters for me. i come across this and fall in love. ok so on to the review- writing quality - my english is bad (3rd lang lol) but i think its pretty good. it makes me feel good, theres nothing i dont understand, and thats all i want. stability of update: theres daily update so im happy, pls keep it up story: its just started so i dont know but it looks like author has a lot of plan. everything is very detailed so i think the story gonna be good. chara design: to me most important is mc and i love her character in this. evelyn is very cute but also shes the mc i really want. she didnt hesitate or regret killing the guy when her life was at stake. i hate wishy washy mc. she still has good side. she adore little vivi, she like amara, she love her parents. shes not lazy and make decision fast. when she wanted to beat tristan up she went and did it. lol. overall i think very good. world background: i have no idea tbh. maybe later we know, rn too little info (im chapter 9). ok so thats done. author i hope u keep updating this wonderful story, i love it so much.