Badges 9
Moments 28
nice you are back 馃榿
ch 136 148. Lorin's Financial Health
The Last Warlock
Fantasy 路 kommers
A few more words of praise: the book has been absolutely fantastic. It is one of the best on webnovel
ch 26 Chapter 25- Unpleasant Scent
Angelic Beast
Sci-fi 路 Dylan_Callahan
yooooo! first comment XD
ch 98 Chapter 98: Black Hole
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
Anime & Comics 路 SlyOW
Thanks for the chapter! You are writing a really cool book!
ch 171 Soul skill
The Ruined Death Knight
Fantasy 路 Allenheim
thats a good chapter!
ch 170 Efforts of two years
The Ruined Death Knight
Fantasy 路 Allenheim
thanks for the chapter!
ch 93 Chapter 93: Styx
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
Anime & Comics 路 SlyOW
You wrote this perfectly!
ch 28 Chapter 28: Limit Breaker
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
Anime & Comics 路 SlyOW
your language is very good. no need to improve in that area[img=recommend]
ch 21 Chapter 21: The Hood
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
Anime & Comics 路 SlyOW
not nessesarly. Although a faster development would be nice you have to watch out not to make it too quick. the key point is for him to break through the mortal limit after all. i am sure there have been more talented humans before him and even those guys from history didnt succeed. also you dont have to explain every single detail: for whatever reason he is doing this or doing that. that drags out the story to an insane degree. dont write empty words, give them a meaning!
ch 21 Chapter 21: The Hood
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
Anime & Comics 路 SlyOW
Spannung....
At this moment, the situation could be imagined as if Max's mind consisted of a multitude of tiny particles that flew away to the most related spiritual structures. It was certainly an interesting experience, but Rowena understood that without help, it would take him an unknown amount of time to get back together. At the same time, she noted the fact that the transformation launched by the ritual and the potion requires much more resources and energy than both the ritual itself and Max himself can give.
Harry Potter: New World
Movies 路 HPMan
thanks! you are writing a really good book! i hope you will continue it!
ch 294 Chapter 294
Harry Potter: New World
Movies 路 HPMan
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 100 <Size Alteration>
Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy 路 MN_1223
van Dou Update patreon pleeaase?
ch 96 Spar - Defence as Offence.
Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy 路 MN_1223
nice chapter! i am interested to see how he will perform against the aliens
ch 94 Martial Category Innate Talent
Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy 路 MN_1223
thanks for the chapter!
ch 364 Plan.
Unsealing Emptiness
Eastern 路 Bird_0f_Hermes