You've asked manu times to help in anything lacking. So far I like the story but what bothers me is having to reread the paragraph because of a simple mistake like saying "him" instead of "her" or vice-versa, same with "he" and "she". It has happened many times and it's confusing. That's it. Great story though.
ch 58 the canopy and dance
Fantasy · nishidurani
I did too, stayed up till 4 in the morning once.[img=recommend]
ch 195 Chapter 72
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
can you read "entwined souls"? there are many similarities to this story and I even saw the name Abigail instead of Angela almost like they copied and past to forget about the name there. The story of a man who doesn't love, the girl who tries to make him love and has a list of things to do on dates. including playing video games, a kiss in the rain, vacation... The man calms down when being hugged by her. I don't know, when I read it it reminds me of this story with Abigail.
ch 645 It's time
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX