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LMAO. You can barely spell in your response, and with what little I got its clear you’re nothing but some loser who cant take negative feedback. What a sad child you are.

Honestly this story started out ok and I was really enjoying it, then the author started trying too hard to be “anti meta” in the story. I honestly should have figured from the sypnosis, but the author goes out of his way to make sure that he can claim to be spechul for his “originality”. From things like the MC being AGAINST stat points for the first 30 or so chapters, to constant remarks that felt more like author notes mid story then actual dialogue. Things that come to mind are when he was about to go fight a demon he had to explain in his internal monologue that he all of a sudden wasn’t becoming a battle maniac. Another example was him actually explaining that him saying “take the world as my own” wasn’t literal. Little comments like these just made it seem like the author was breaking the fourth wall subtly to try and speak mid story and it felt disconnecting as hell. There’s also the fact that the MC is kinda….bland. Nothing really stands out and the recent shift from “fish out of water” to “let me taunt and take down and entire group of thugs/criminals” feels jarring as hell. I understand he’s been working towards that but it kinda felt like a whiplash because it seems to have sorta come out of left field. There’s also some weird personality change I seem to have missed? At one point he was threatening and actively trying to kill Harley and now all of a sudden the author is saying he won’t kill anyone? What? Its just sort of a jumbled mess all around. The writing quality (as in grammar and sentence structure, not plot) was great (for webnovel anyway) though. So kudos for making an actually readable story.

It is indubitably that time, for another banger. In all seriousness, this one has been a blast so far and its only gonna go up from here. Can’t wait to inevitably body pain :)

I for one, am looking forward to older wendy lewds. In all seriousness this one is pretty good. Its got a pretty based and under appreciated magic style as well. Would give it a read.