Tadeas_Manzel - Profile

Hello, review time First of all, i am at ch.100 writting: till now i didnt find anything which would stop me and i needed to reread anything i should have problem to understand if there were any typos, it was simply gone past me as story is understandable and fine so max star for me . Story development: well in short, excelent, its not necessary slow or fast its simply flow, as it should be so i apreciated rlly much how it went 5* here also. . Character design: i will not writte about MC and side characters specialy here, but overall i think author give his all for his characters and story itself. it can be seem by readers or at least by me for me simply 10* but i can give only 5* (even characters i simply dont like are well done) updating: well here isna bit of problem, but author went though some personal problems in his life and is surprise the story is back on track and again updated, from neutral point of view its not updated much, so i have to give 3*, but you know, author has his own life, his own problem and as reader who rlly apreciate his work, i must say, thank you and hope you keep going even if there are things which block your path, i have and keep my thumbs and roting for you. . World background: 5*, HP is great by original author and thia author give new spectale to read to this show. . now a bit wording about story by me can contain spoiler sp read in caution pls. . I rlly fast liked the MC, he is not perfect but what is perfect in life, he can be dumb sometume, clever and smart sometimes and simply live his life, i cant help but like him, dumb in case even if he is smart he cant see oblivious immediately as he missed things woth imperio curse on barty and after it seems something is of with kharkarov he just brash it of, but he is human, teenager and has a lot on his plate so even if sometimes his brain can think of it its natural and i promise you will like him. I rlly dont like fleur and am bit dissapointed that she end up with mc, but even if i dont like her, i must say, author rlly put great job with her, even i as i dont like her simply in the end accepted her as part of mc (and that did author woth his hands to me) so rlly well done.Well I still wait how Ron will turn put more, and yee i dont like him too, in original and even here. but agains you can as reader await happily for how it turns out again author did gj. etc. i can continue, there are things which i personaly miss, for example for me mc to much has telationship with girls and speak a lot of with them, but i miss he is good to harry which i love to see, but simply miss it more that he could mean Khan interact with him and be more close, i know he take him as younger brother and harry tale him as older brother, but their interaction in story is rlly sidetur ed in story and more place is taken towards only girls, which i find a bit of pity, because its like it could be a harem in this way which i hate (but its not harem till now i know he has fleur only for now) but i can name: daphne, luna, hermione, fleur, etc. a lot girls are interacting with mc during storyline, but how many boys, only harry and only occasionaly, it much viewed for me as sone small harem even if its not right to say its harem, simply put i find it a pity he dont interact with boys the same as with so many girls at least with harry, as they consider brothers with each other a bit, i found it why not share something private or secret just between "boys" and put girls out of it that what i miss a lot. but in overall, as fanfic i can find better storry than this one for now at least and i read books and novels like for 25 years now mb more a bit. for original works put in quation, this story mb not be my top but its stil in better bag of stories i read till now. and to be trutfull about something author a lot interact with readers thats good rlly, but a lot of his though are on start nearly of all chapters sometimes i must say truth skip it i read like 50 percent paragrafs of author himself and skipped half as i couldnt wait for continue of the story, but i like author and that he do it i just mb am not suited for all of his though still there was some i am glad i didnt miss as chapter i am back, which i found rlly important and also root for author from deep of my hearth. so as my ending words: Thanks author for your work, keep going and i hope your health will be good and your eyes too. again thanks for your time soul and work you put for us with this story.