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ItWasMiguel

ItWasMiguel

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Moro num país tropical, abandonado por Deus! E fudido por naturezaaaa~

2021-01-17 Joined Brazil

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ItWasMiguel
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ch 15 Chapter 15 - We Stay Hungry, we Devour

Naruto: Infinite Possibility

Naruto: Infinite Possibility

Anime & Comics · MessyLife

ItWasMiguel
ItWasMiguel
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Where is the guy saying "in the harem, i hope" now?

ItWasMiguel
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:(

Hinata:"H-he kissed m-me, He kissed me, Na-naruto-kun kissed me!, But only in the cheek :(" Said Hinata as she was blushing while walking her way back home

Reincarnated in Naruto, Yeah Naruto

Reincarnated in Naruto, Yeah Naruto

Action · Kurosawa_Taiki

ItWasMiguel
ItWasMiguel
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yes I'll be annoying, you're welcome. The crying at birth is spontaneous. The doctor doesn't need to slap him! If they do not cry, it is necessary for the pediatrician to perform the so-called neonatal resuscitation, removing the secretion that they have in their mouth and nose and offering oxygen through a tube. I was already longing to write more than 2 paragraphs with information that no one cares, I say goodbye. (Google translator)

ItWasMiguel
ItWasMiguel
Replied to GhostWolf

Were you talking about the level of talent? Katsuo never saw a god, nor a devil, so the best comparison was that of a superpowered monster that he has already faced.

ItWasMiguel
Replied to SCP_0999

Thanks!

ItWasMiguel
Replied to GhostWolf

maybe? :)

ItWasMiguel
Replied to Shinto_no_Kami

the devil will give him the ability to use shadow magic and other magics in this darker style

ItWasMiguel
ItWasMiguel
Replied to Darkstel

after thinking about your comment for a while, I decided to leave Shiori only as a sister of the protagonist! Thanks a lot for the help!

ItWasMiguel
Replied to Darkstel

oh, right, I understand what you mean by making the Original Characters not help the protagonist when it comes to winning over the girls. I was thinking about getting the protagonist to go to Clover Kigdom at 12-13 years old, leaving Shiori and the other Original Character in Hino. There in Clover he will meet the girls in the canon, making the girls like him by himself, for example with Charlote just like the canon, he was going to save her. already with Lolopechka he was going to help her with the curse and make an alliance between Clover and Heart. and the other girls too, he was going to conquer by himself, without any help. do you think this is good? -this specific answer was written with google translator, sorry if I misspell

ItWasMiguel
Replied to ItWasMiguel

ah, i forgot to write, but if in time i get bored with Shiori (OC) i can just leave her as the protagonist's sister.

ItWasMiguel
Replied to Darkstel

thank you so much! I will do everything you said, but unfortunately I already wrote another Original Character, but that other one will be the last. about her being Mary Sue, I already planned to make her like an ordinary person, with flaws and qualities. I like to at least try to make more human characters, your tips helped a lot! if you can, i would be very grateful if you could suggest girls for the harem, these are the ones i thought: Charlotte Roselei Charmy Vanessa Secre Lolopechka (I still don't know about Mimosa and Noelle) In addition to two Original Characters

ItWasMiguel
Replied to Darkstel

well, i really wouldn't want to just delete my Original Character (considering the next 10 chapters in which it appears, rewriting them will take time), so if you can, please tell me how can i make it less worse?

ItWasMiguel
ItWasMiguel
Replied to Darkstel

Thanks for the comments! honestly, I would like to ask why you don't like an Original Character, if you can answer me, I would be grateful!

ItWasMiguel
Replied to RamenGuy

thanks for commenting the error! I typed wrong, I'm sorry. it was meant to be: "his desires have limits", for example, he could not desire immortality or omnipotence.

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