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I like the story. Yeah you can improve, but in all honesty everybody can improve. When you stop improving, you become stagnant. It's better to just keep writing. As far as criticism goes, only listen to the ones where they specifically mention what they thought you got wrong. Those are the ones that are genuinely trying to help you. Even then, if you don't agree, then you don't have to do anything. It's your story. Do what you feel is right for your story.
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What if? Severus Snape.
Anime & Comics · Supes
You know what you should do with the arrays that he is going to learn is t he stuff that the eternals do in the movie. Most of these powers have these glowing type glyphs to activate. He could probably do the same. Just and idea. I've enjoyed the story so far so I trust you to write well.
ch 48 Chapter 48: Facing Super Skrull
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
Thanks for the update
ch 173 Ch. 173 A dream of snakes
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
I look forward to every time you update. So don’t let the haters get you down. Your story is great. You just keep doing what you’re doing. Authors who are consistently updating like you are will always have my respect. While I might not enjoy all of their stories, I enjoy yours.
ch 62 Notes (It's a rant)
Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon