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Seems pretty interesting. I haven’t seen much stories with the mc being the mentor. I’ll be honest the other options pretty much had the same synopsis which had me bored. I think this is the only one with the disciple thing? Anyways- im looking forward to it (o≧▽ﾟ)o

(I haven’t finished reading this yet) Overall this is a pretty fun read. Unless you’re picky with what you read you’ll probably enjoy this. I like how the main character did his best to make up for what he did in his past life. And how he’s more kind hearted compared to his first life. I’m also a big fan of the sibling dynamics! ( ´͈ ॢꇴ `͈ॢ)･*♡ However, there are some things that I did question a bit. First, we don’t really know the mc’s original personality that well. But considering he still had his memories in tact in his second life wouldn’t some traits that he had before still remain in tact? I mean I guess we did see that when he got mad at the two kids for fighting. But from the chapters I’ve read that was the only instance it showed. Second, how did the mc and the kid who got stuffed inside a luggage just KNOW they got reincarnated/transmigrated? Third, while the betrayal and his brother killing him was the mc’s fault wouldn’t that normally scare a person? Or cause them to flinch? “Oh this was the person who betrayed me.” “This person is the one who stabbed me.” Even if it was the mc’s fault it happened that would send some sort of anxiety. Getting stabbed and dying by bleeding out wouldn’t exactly feel nice. Fourth, the way the mc’s little brother opened up to him was too fast for me. Even if my brother started acting kind instead of leaning into that warmth I would just interact enough but not too much. I can understand spying on him but the sudden switch of gears just shocked me I guess? I mean- The mc was obssessed with trying to kill his little brother for ALL his life. It felt like the mc didn’t work for it. (Mending his relationship I mean.) OH I have to say I really liked the lil arc (?) with the mc’s friends that he opened up to in his first life. I actually like the fact that he was cold to them. That he completely forgot their past friendship, blindsided with trying to mend his relationship with his brother etc. “Jumping the fence to the other side where the grass is greener” He treated them as if they were just shady kids from shady families. As if he was better because he’s different now. When in reality he pretty much recruited them and dragged them Into the mess. (In his first life) But he coldly sent them letters to end their relationship WITHOUT a second glance. And the regret that just SINKS into the mc when he bumps into them. I LOVE IT! ( ͒˃̩̩⌂˂̩̩ ͒)

I can’t really say much about the characters and world building since we’re only six chapters in BUT so far it’s been really good!! ♥(ˆ⌣ˆԅ) I really like how the beginning was set up and how we started with the other characters POV where we see them on their way to meet the mc! ♡ ～('▽^人) I also like the premise!! I’m really curious to see how things will turn out! (Also it’s pretty funny how they react to the littlest things the mc does-)(*≧▽≦)ﾉｼ))