Training puppet w/ all weapons training to maximize his necklace’s potential
ch 259 Chen Li - Di Xiong
Eastern · JosieGan
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 100 Mortal Again
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
Thx for chapters.
ch 58 Moving like a normal person
Urban · DevSCB
Just checked your first mention of her was ch 17 with no actual introduction. She had a name drop at the end and first dialog was ch 19 when she just referred to Shirizens as lord.
(I can't have Grayfia in the harem, I should have written that she is not married, but I forgot. Instead, maybe I can resurect her dead family and have her sister or mom or something take her place. Also, taking Maulketh to God of War would be fun.)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
+1
Original: You should've guessed it.
Eastern · thewhitesnow
+1
Flowery: Supple twin peaks, Honey pot, Wonder cave,
Eastern · thewhitesnow
Both, mix and match so every chapter has its own little flair.
Do you guys want a flowery description for smut scenes or an original?
Eastern · thewhitesnow
Me
ch 52 The hidden dangers finally coming to light
Fantasy · The_POZ
Personally don’t like other verse powers being used in different worlds. Skills and techniques go for it but powers always break the power scales. So I vote remove.
Last but not least..do you guys want to take me out pica pica no mi. If yes comment in this paragraph.]
Anime & Comics · jojojo66
I think this is a chapter from before the re-write.
Well Chen Li had his evil Long side and his Emperor Long goodie two shoes side that you had just got to starting with.
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Keep the beast contact since he doesn’t know or trust her. However I don’t think you should go his full evil side like the original. Personally I prefer your characters more balanced personality of both good and evil. Rather than just one or the other.
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I’d say just don’ make your character pure evil side of hen+@i. Like the good girls get the good seduction, lucky pervert and whatnot becoming his allie girls. Where the others get the black.male turning into tool girls.
ch 0 1 Hentai Development System
Urban · ELLOMYGELLO
It almost seems that she still sees as just her cute disciple / son and treating him as a kid. So while everyone else is starting to him growing into a strong cultivator she just sees him loosing his innocence and fights against his choices. Well that’s my opinion on her character at least also why I can see past the ”bad image” her character can get. Once she accepts his change though I see her status changing fast. Thanks for the chapter.
After that, Tantai Yuan immediately came out from within the Ark, and she shot swiftly towards Old Man Sun's residence, and it was clear from her expression that she was very worried.
Eastern · JosieGan
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My Life as Naruto Uzumaki - Harem Route
Anime & Comics · SilverSnow125