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He means OP is literally just writing out the movie. 0 orginality.

Typical scumbag move of putting 99% of the words on a copy-paste of nonsense to buff up the size of the book. There is nothing unique what so ever in these chapters. MC does the EXACT same thing down to a t except one minor detail.

Incredibility unlikable MC. I couldn't make it past the first chapter with how unbearable he is. Already acting higher than mighty and is god-tier level OP in the first chapter. Why bother reading a fic where the MC has literally 0 challenge? Hard pass.

Mediocre. The author notes are obnoxious and don't make it clear when they start and end, so you randomly get thrown out of the story by the author notes. Story is pretty mediocre, nothing special. Proof reading is desperately needed

Medicore. The amount of edge is absurd and the amount of effort to make the MC seem special and perfect is ridiculous. ...................................