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Commented Ill be real with you chief I didnot enjoy it because of A few things. first off speech marks are not always used when someone speaks. Also the past tense and present tense is a mess. the amount of times the mc “look” at someone is too much. Almost every “look” should be replaced with “looks” for example, Arc looks at Mei.
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Replied to Vastreader Amen brother
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Commented u have my full support :)
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Commented I liked the chapter felt like it told us a lot that we needed to know thank you
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Great work stimp
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