Robert_Kurzweil

6mth

Commented

He already reached 12-star in Metal at Chapter 684. He gained access or visibility to his internal sea of Nihility. He was at 1250/35000 for his metal force there. There was no other mentions of his other forces getting to 12-star prior to this chapter. Author should fix this as it makes it seem that the sea is worthless here.

This was his first Force that had reached the 12-star general stage!

Complete Martial Arts Attributes

Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

Robert_Kurzweil

10mth

Commented

Did the author do a major rewrite from chapters 145 onwards? It seems there is major differences from when I read this chapter and going forward to the overall content and plot of the story. The whole rewrite of meeting the Medicine Valley cultivators verses random thieves after the auction, Xu Yuan, etc. Almost like a alternate version of the same story. Anyone else notice this?

ch 145 Divine Artifact Building

I Can Extract Everything

Eastern · Mysterious_Pen

Robert_Kurzweil

1yr

Commented

Good to hear. I feel like the setup or early description of the cathedral lent itself touch more potential mc development. Especially when he only got weapon mastery by using a sword in combat. if he picked up a spear or staff, what would have happened if used in combat? Or if he meditated in the cathedral? Like I said, I just saw a lot of potential there.

ch 0 7 Growth

The Black Necromancer

Fantasy · Nilo_A

Robert_Kurzweil

1yr

Commented

Agree to both the centipede nest and rock slab. I wonder why the mc never looks for why no one can enter the cathedral, try other weapons, meditate, or any other skills. Seems like something is missing from the potential here.

ch 0 8 Catalyst

The Black Necromancer

Fantasy · Nilo_A

Robert_Kurzweil

1yr

Commented

Does anyone know if the mc explores the chapel, inspects the other skeletons for information or even inspects the monster corpses? I feel like this is becoming a Mario Brothers side stroller, with only having to push the A button to attack and move forward. Hopefully more background, System details, etc. are forthcoming.

ch 0 7 Growth