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It’s no longer allowing me to read chapters its like they are locked 🤷🏻‍♂️

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

That cliff though! lol

I enjoyed the in depth incite. It's always great to explain in depth what is happening in one chapter and get it out of the way instead of dragging readers chapter after chapter trying to have them piece it together. That can cause a reader to think you are putting out filler chapters. Also, it stopped you from having to jump back and forth from the Main character Rudra and Nightmare in the future which can be quite annoying and stall a story line. Thank you for your hard work and creativity!

Isn't that kinda like the real world though? There will always be someone out there that has more or just as much as you. It's usually how you use it or manage things that become a major factor. Heck, currently 2 of the richest people in the world Musk and Bezio are fighting a space war. Even billionaires compete for a edge. His edge is his reincarnation. His decisions and actions are already causing a butterfly effect. It's how he is going to manage his knowledge/power to keep on top. That makes the whole plot. Nightmare popping up is a curveball and a unknown variable. Making us ask the questions. Where'd he come from? Who is he? How did he become so powerful in this timeline? How is Rudra going to face him? Is he actually going to lose?

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

I feel like in the last time line it was mentioned the land of the dragons was never found. I think maybe Nightmare is on a quest line at this time to find the lost land of dragons and was afforded as an award for completing part of the questline a vial of dragons blood hence a special move granted, "Blood of the dragons." Butterfly effect from altering the Elven quest line and the AI trying to balance the world out.

Threw all my golden tickets at this book! keep up the great work!

I love the concept, plot, etc. My only suggestion is having the chapters properly proofread and edited. I don't want to judge the book to early based off a few chapters. However, It was hard to fully enjoy because of the grammatical errors. Keep up the hard work. It's only a small critique and not putting down your effort. Thank you.

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

This story is really doing a huge time leap. I can only hope it is worth it. I hope he doesn't come out of this dungeon like he is all omnipotent and immediately destroys everything and bam end of story! It'd be way to OP of a main.