Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

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ch 0 9 Fear

Demon's Virtue

Fantasy · DiceVR

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Like it so much!

ch 0 9 Fear

Demon's Virtue

Fantasy · DiceVR

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Commented

This Robert POV is interesting.

ch 23 Not so easy mission

Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor

LGBT+ · AmateurAuthor

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Commented

Like this history.

In fact, the history of Border Town was less than three decades long. Compared to nearly 200 years of Longsong Stronghold, it was a mere newborn baby. Originally Duke of Ryan was just going to build an outpost here as an early warning for the invasion of demonic beasts, but he did not expect to discover a wealth of mineral resources at North Slope Mountain after land reclamation. So he decided to set up the town here, and named it Border Town. In a sense, it was North Slope Mine that created the town.

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Replied to lil_fox

I think so too.

Through the French window behind him, he could see the town extending into endless mountains. The mountain passed through the continents of the Impassable Mountain Range, dividing Kingdom of Graycastle and Wild Places into east and west. And North Slope Mountain was just a branch of the Impassable Mountain Range.

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Commented

Nice chapter.

ch 16 The Road Ahead

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

ch 15 Misconceptions

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Replied to kuriyama

LOL

ch 15 Misconceptions

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

2yr

Replied to Ankit_GoDelock

exp

ch 0 6 Exp

The Exp Book

History · StarDemen

Ankit_GoDelock

3yr

Replied to Ankit_GoDelock

Warlock. I mean. [img=recommend]

ch 14 The Ability

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

3yr

Commented

Wish to be a witch. hehehe

ch 14 The Ability

Release That Witch

Fantasy · Er Mu

Ankit_GoDelock

3yr

Posted

Nic work. The story is very well written. The main character Roland is an intriguing character. He is a good guy to a fault, and because of that, or in some cases despite that, it's hard to hate him. The witches also show promise as supporting characters, and the ones that already had a part in the plot, are fleshed out, are not redundant, and are not useless to the plot. The magic system in the story is very unique and integrates well with science. Overall, the story is very much recommended, I will not go into the world-building, as to not spoil anything. Another nice thing is that the story has already been complete. I hope you all enjoy reading the story just as much as I did. 😊