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it's a good story, but it's not this author's, it's a straight-up word-for-word copy of Reincarnation game book one from ffnet. disapointing.
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for Max
I leaned in close, my voice a menacing whisper. "Mercy? You showed me none. You tortured me, manipulated me, and forced me to kill something I loved. Now, it's your turn to experience the same pain."
MCU: Skull and Bones
Movies · Swarthy
The war started in 1970, Tom started calling his followers death eaters before even that but they weren't publically known, only people like Dumbledore knew about it before 1970, But now in the yr 1971 in which the marauders joined as first years, the war has been going on for a year, so they would know about it.
"Death Eaters are the followers of the Dark Lord Voldemort. He started a war against muggle-born wizards and wants to erase them. So, you need to be careful around people from Slytherin," James explained.
Felix Scarletwound: The Transfiguration Prodigy
Book&Literature · Morscribe
lighting is all well and good but have you ever PRAISED THE SUN
-Lighting spear (unleashes a compressed lighting spear, which can pierce)]
Playing Firebending (Legend of Korra SI)
TV · blazuki
This is reaching isekai protagonist level of denseness.
When Axel had seen Daphne standing out of breath right outside the door using the Arcane Eyes, he was so surprised that he hadn't even bothered changing properly before he had opened the door, which is probably why she had run away right now. As expected, this body is too ugly to look at.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
it's the Snoop G O double D
Storing the paper I smiled, 'Thanks Snoop.' As Miki returned she handed me some extra money.
Issei Hyoudou is the Summoner!
Anime & Comics · DownfallstrikerX7
Hestia do be bestia
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The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
slightly more paragraph breaks and include more spaces between changes from thoughts to spoken words but those are mere aesthetic changes, if you wish to improve your quality of the writing then i suggest you read more while trying to write some unrelated stuff in thier styles and then continue in your style, you'll notice you seem to have picked up some habits that you personally do not mind from a lot of the authors you emulated. i personally started with emulating the works of Charles Dickens and I've been told that my writing had become overly verbose after that. other than that my friend, practice, practice and practice.
- Any advise on improving my writing?
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
it is of no concern to me. to do so or not do so is your own prerogative.
- Do you guys see it when i write in italics?
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
more of plot with fluff thrown in intermittently seems to be the consensus and i concur that it would be the outcome which i would prefer.
- Would you guys enjoy a relentless assault of fluff with some plot? Or much more plot going on with the fluff as a stress relief?
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
the relevant parts of the world shall be developed as necessary , for example, explaining the history of the wizengamot and how it functions just before Marcus joins the wizengamot for the first time would be better than to explain the wizengamot while reading about it in the library.
- Would you guys prefer an extremely detailed, well developed Wizarding World and Magic? Or would you prefer at as background development while we focus on plot & fluff?
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
your writing of character interactions are too interesting and well written to be missed for the acceleration. most would be happy to see similar slow progress for such great writing.
- Would you prefer an accelerated plot, until Magnus meets his love interest? Or would you like to continue with the slow development?
HP: Eagle Soars
Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
This was by far my favourite way in which an SI was introduced to a new world. absolutely incredible i tell you. If I was sitting on a seat I'd be at the edge of it. Impressive writing, to the say the least. I felt the emotions of the character through the words, a great thing for a POV . Now I am invested in the story and would love to see what continues. Truly an enjoyable experience. Best of luck for your future writings.
ch 0 1 Prologue: Knocked Off Course
A Degree in Sorcery (SI)
Book&Literature · Ashtar29
i started reading it just now .saw it was a rewrite after I finished it and then read online the original one since it has more progress . and this started is simply so much better that i couldn't read the old one for long . as soon as he thinks to burn it I'm like, but the rewrite had a better idea .so yeah, guess imma wait.
ch 0 1 Life Changes RW
Transmigrated as Issei Hyoudou
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith
it seems some reviewers have the patience of a toddler. yes the story is pretty slow. if you consider it story wise. but seeing as how hundreds of years have passed already in just 33 chapters it's pretty fast . i like the worldbuilding and background information. it's fun. all in all i like it and can't wait to read more.
Reborn as Hades In PJO
Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru