Very nice as a start, I really liked the description of the environment and especially the final part of the chapter. I hope you continue to bring other content. Unfortunately, however, in the translation I found some errors which I hope you pay attention to in the next chapter, great work, keep it up
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Very nice as a start, I really liked the description of the environment and especially the final part of the chapter. I hope you continue to bring other content. Unfortunately, however, in the translation I found some errors which I hope you pay attention to in the next chapter, great work, keep it up
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