Void_1122

"Exactly, if you do things that way then it'll be over by tomorrow. Now, there's one more thing I wanted to say. I don't if you've seen him or not but the opponent you're going to fight against in the finals is a pretty rough guy."

Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

Fantasy · moon_senpai

Void_1122

1yr

Commented

you didn't have to write her name it was pretty obvious from the first part of the sentence that it was her so you didn't need to add that part,or you could have wrote [Anya's POV] that would've been much better

After parting ways with Zero, I, Anya Blanks walked toward the room where all the other participants were.

Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting

Fantasy · moon_senpai

Void_1122

1yr

Replied to Ryukurou

ohh,I see thanks for making that clear to me 😊

I was more worried about Leon. This should have been the third time Leon ever used his stigma. The problem here was that his stigma was too powerful for his body to handle.

The Extra's Odyssey

Fantasy · Ryukurou

Void_1122

1yr

Commented

first*?

I was more worried about Leon. This should have been the third time Leon ever used his stigma. The problem here was that his stigma was too powerful for his body to handle.

The Extra's Odyssey

Fantasy · Ryukurou

Void_1122

1yr

Commented

the experience of being robbed of your senses and not having any control over your body isn't something...*

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The Extra's Odyssey

Fantasy · Ryukurou

Void_1122

1yr

Commented

not wanting to *

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The Extra's Odyssey

Fantasy · Ryukurou

Void_1122

1yr

Commented

why is Nathan so weak ? ,the previous Nathan was said to be very hardworking so it doesn't make sense for him to be this weak , or is there a reason for it?

Adding Nathan to the equation wouldn't change anything. He does have the highest compatibility, but his strength is also the lowest.