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Excellent writing. The quality is far better than what I would expect of web novel. The characters seem pretty fleshed out. I just hope that the fully tragic arc of both the fl and ml won't drag on too long cause they're both sweethearts especially the fl. All in all, great writing. Its a story that I truly want to keep reading !

This review is not to undermine the book or anything just my real opinion. This book is completely toxic. Literally everyone is toxic in it. The bullies, the friends, the MC hell even the dad. Plus I don't get the comments about how its a new concept cuz its pretty much the same as all the other books. From the plot line to the background even to the damn powers. However that is not what I would condemn as I like power fantasies. My problem with this book is the subpar writing quality and the toxicity and shallowness of every character. They are like cardboard cutouts of the dumbest people in a cultivation novel. Tbh only these two things bother me. The cliched aspect of the book( basic power fantasy, power extraction, bullied MC, slightly forced plot, the usual everyone has a crush on one girl in the academy and weird edgy creep MC) don't bother me at all, just the two aforementioned things. However I guess one positive of this book would be that the flow and pacing is pretty good.