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Great story faced pace with great detail !! keep it up !!
ch 73 Graham Family
The Magician of Sound
Sci-fi · Fixten
I find the way that you portray the young master s from rich families very aptly and that they are well written and get the point across with detail but in the future could you write parts like these shorter because while I enjoy them and think that they go well with your writing style I think that trying to fit in more of the overall story or point of this chapter is better though as a fellow writer that has written some stories though not on this platform that there is only so much you can fit in a chapter and have to bridge into another, and I hope you continue to write more of this excellent story which one of the better written and translated web novels I've read.
On the other side, the young masters also saw these two people's scores. Since their girlfriends were here, they thought it would be a waste if they don't take advantage of this opportunity and show off their own strength. They heard those two calling the woman "Instructor", so they figured that the other side were most likely part of the military or something. The girls would clearly admire them if they could prove that they had more power than those soldiers.
Ace of The Dragon Division
War · Dust Wind
Nice Drone
ch 136 Bats
Spending My Retirement In A Game
Games · DiceVR