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This was my second novel on web novel. I just stumbled upon it. There was another book on Quotev with same name. It was a tragedy story. 2 best friend were forced to be together by her father. She had a boyfriend so she hated this marriage not him though. He was forced to be with her because her father was paying medical bill for his little sister. Later when the sister learned about his marriage she was angry with him because he promised her to be the flower girl and told him to never visit again. The day his sister recover, the couple had a fight. As He was driving away as he normally run away from argument, she yelled "I hate you". He threw away his house key and drove off the cliff. His sister came to visit him but it was too late. On the day of his funeral, the wife saw her ex boyfriend with his beautiful wife. She realized everything was meaningless.

This book has potential. Without those face slapping scenes it's refreshing. I would recommend it. I personally like Li Jun because I like gentle guys. There is nothing wrong to be submissive. Arrogant and stubborn women should choose submissive guys in my opinion because there wouldn't be much misunderstanding or power struggle.

Repeation gets on my nerve. Maybe it's okay to write about a thing which is not famous in western culture like how camel is best in desert but repeating like 6-8 times actually kills the mood.

Watch Dr Storm. He made glass like it was nothing. Also didn’t high level Jacklan destroy 8 elemental giants? They didn’t have arrows I’m sure those gems were pure. He can make telescope with those.