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nah, you started the badmouthing and i just went with it . Your's was not direct like mine tho . You just said how much better your novel is and how my taste is crap . You were butthurt that i was not fawning over your work and attacked my tastes and not my opinion. Dont play nice , its plain clear how you throw shade but pass it off as if you are doing me a favour . But i guess , that doesnt matter to you . I think you deleted my comment , so just go ahead and delete this one as well and leave that clean slate full of praises for your uninspired work . Its boring talking to a self-righteous brick wall , that tries to frame me as a bad guy for his lackluster efforts , but oh well .ya brought me to your level . I turned my criticism personal and made an attack to the person and not the work ( even though it was clearly sarcasm). At least i know iim wrong though. Never learn from your mistakes and only accept positive criticism[img=recommend]. Cause you are right and im wrong . Never stray from that mentality . After all, im just a hater right?¯\_(ツ)_/¯

i bet you feel really proud of this word-salad you just wrote and as much as i would like to enter your little maturity contest i'll pass. oh , well first of all. The hero power is bland , so , so,so bland . Also ,dude.... people are not anime characters ,names are not used often in daily conversation . What friends do you have that respond to you with your name at the end of every sentence? Find me a movie (Hollywood type ) where the characters do that. People dont do that .Period . Also yes he is not phased by killing a teenager, sudden shock for 3 seconds and calling the ambulance is not enough. Ever murdered anything other than ants ? A chicken being killed is enough to make you have nightmares . He should be shocked , he should be thinking about only that and not forget the fact he sucked a corpse dry and go home . What else ...uhm. Oh yeah ,people are cowards . KILLING THINGS IS NOT EASY, OR PLEASURABLE . It can be rewarding and an accomplishment, but full murder hobo aint real people dude. Killing and smilling when you are a first timer? And a rabid animal that lives off killing people? This guy is full of flaws , not genuine human flaws . Anime edgy harem mc flaws . His worries , mannerisms , way of thinking is making me so detached because he sounds so unbelievably fake . And yes if in 5 chapters nothing sounds interesting, its bad,cause even if by chapter 30 its a masterpiece of unparalleled literarry talent its still crap, because it couldnt grab the attention. A review of 5 chapters is still a review. As long as its not hate and has some criticism. But with things like my vampire system being number 1, cant really expect much. Gotta love the fact that you actually ran out of things to say ,yet felt it was not enough and decide personal attack was the way to go . Discredit the other party . Age old technique. Dont really get where you got any of your arguments , but whatever. Stroke your ego little man, at least i gave you the attention your parents didn't. SEE , that was a good personal attack ,instead of all the you claim . Keep notes, or think of a better one and i'll keep notes. I take back if i said that i didnt care before, lets continue this . Its fun to have dialogues like that, makes my free time less boring. Write another essay next time .

5 chapters and im out ... How are there only good reviews for this ?!? The twist is done so poorly, its underwhelming. The magic and power of the hero and party sounds so bland and from the first chapter it feels like a medium strength party. Thats what the extent of the Heroe's party strength comes to ? There is no creativity ,no major thought put into this. In 5 chapters i only know 6 things about mc 1) lives with a girl with big boobs that has white hair and powers ( we know its fl but not because we were led to that . it could be his sister or a friend or a roommate idk) 2) he really likes noodles 3)he wanted to go kill stuff in the tower and was gathering money for weapons 4) he really , really ,really likes the tower and is excited about it ( pretty much all he talks about even though that should be a conversation he should have been bored having by now, 3 years after the tower existed ) 5)he has no qualms killing living beings ( perfectly normal i say ,most mc are murder happy idiots these days that are not afraid of rabid, pillage hungry murder machines known as goblins, also completely glosses over killing a teenager and sucking his power ). 6) He really likes saying lilith (fl name) in every sentence , which is not how people talk. Bland , over-recycled trash . nothing to hold interest. Cant believe this was rewarded. It should remade from the bottom up , there are too many problems to fix and this review is not long enough to address them. But again that is the standard of webnovel. No hate against you author , just being honest. Ya can do better.