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5d

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Welp that’s another story…

ch 47 congenital disease

Shining God in Danmachi

Anime & Comics · Cozmooo

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6d

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… dude wants to be on the main team when he isn’t even good…

ch 35 This Security Guard is a Vampire

Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog

Sports · SandKastle

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12d

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Hmm.. the amount of MTL trash passing through into WebNovel without actual editing done is increasing day by day

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Becoming an Audience Member Right After Graduation!

The Immortal Cultivation Game Has Come True

Eastern · The Most Handsome In Xiushan

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What in the cultivation shenanigans is this 😂

The hierarchy of Knights represented a form of human evolution accessible to all, not limited by the presence of a magical core. Furthermore, through rigorous training, knights could significantly extend their lifespan, with Sky Knights living beyond 150 years.

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

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13d

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.. this translation needs work

ch 0 4 Complete the mission and receive the reward

The Rebirth of The Ancient Sword Sovereign

Fantasy · EverGreen

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13d

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I am confused.. If he is the ye family head then who do they keep referring them as the lin family??

ch 0 3 The power of the master, killing instantly with one sword

The Rebirth of The Ancient Sword Sovereign

Fantasy · EverGreen

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Fix the values. Stop copy pasting old ones

ch 23 Chapter 23: 'Rapid Rise in Ability' (Seeking to Chase Reading)

The Wizard Path From The Simulator

Eastern · Baa Sheep Sheep Sheep

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Thanks for the chapter!! Glad to see this story back in action :)

ch 1055 Hall Of Fame And Rewards

I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World

Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97

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No Thursday post.. [img=update][img=update]

ch 664 C663 Peter Vs Tiamut (3/3)

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

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And… I’m done here.. Loved reading the book till this point but I felt you were actually going somewhere by incorporating the real world. Thabks anyway

ch 554 Finally Free

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

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.. don’t you already have a story with the same premise ? Why start another one?

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A God is Born...

Reborn as Hades In Greek Mythology

Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru

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Replied to Life_sa_Beach_

Exactly .. we lost out on that interaction. No one cares how he did it. But that first interaction would have been nice to make Yugito’s character more nuanced than just a one liner scene where the character was introduced into the story from an interaction that happened in the author’s thoughts. But again your story.. if yugito is going to be a minor character then it’s fine the way you handled it

"Yugito it's time, I'll come back tomorrow " Itsuki prepared to leave as Yugito looked at him with a pitiful look.

Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy

Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_

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I am not arguing about him being able to go there. It’s not about the powers he has or if he can do it. It’s about him going to Kumo for the first time and meeting yugito. That’s something that would have been nice to read about. There is not need to get defensive from a question either lol

"Yugito it's time, I'll come back tomorrow " Itsuki prepared to leave as Yugito looked at him with a pitiful look.

Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy

Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_

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Maybe in this case you should have? I mean in Konoha that’s fine but Kumo? The man is a Senju and married to an Uzumaki. No one is letting him go to Kumo. Especially since they already tried to kidnap Kushina once already

"Yugito it's time, I'll come back tomorrow " Itsuki prepared to leave as Yugito looked at him with a pitiful look.

Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy

Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_

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And that’s another dead story..

ch 33 Hecate The Witch Queen...

Reborn as Hades In PJO

Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru

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2mth

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Thanks for the chapter! Hope GOT is still in the works :)

ch 98 Drake

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

Movies · NewComer714

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All for him being in GOT!! The movies are also pretty good to get his name out in the market. Nothing exceptional mind you. The 4 are just regular movies. Nothing like 127 hours with its raw emotional performance.