Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!😉😉😉
Urban · Emmy_logz2
The progression in this is super promising, always excited when a chapter comes out. 9/10, quite a nice job author. Could definitely do with a bit of grammar editing but overall not hard to read 😉😉😉
Fantasy · Mist_Vinona
Amazing, absolute ten out of ten 10/10, I adore the Plot, such a fun fantasy romance storyline. Will recommend, outstanding job author, keep it up!
Fantasy · GwenCreepy
Ahhhhhh, love it so much, didn’t expect it to get so good. So mysterious and suspenseful. Lots of fun words too😳. Ten out of ten out of ten would recommend. GG author.
LGBT+ · Miyana
Took me a little while to read completely but definitely worth it. Love it all GG. 10 out of 10 !!! gold star for the author( the romance is great 😵💫)
LGBT+ · Scarletheart84
Amazing, once you get a hang of the writers style it’s easier to stomach , more of a relaxing adventure then a read , could definitely use some more spacing to break up the ideas, overall 7/10!
Eastern · Ograhon
Tense gets muddled and lots of unnecessary words are present . Could use some paragraphs and spacing to break it up so we can read it easier. Overall, great book, great ideas. Fun mix of genres. 7/10
Fantasy · vinthakadha
Definitely a magnetizing story to say the least, glowing review from me, I will continue reading , great job author 7/10. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Fantasy · Wendrila_Kundu
What a wonderful story, you can tell tons of depth and thought was put into this book. Loved being able to immerse in the setting and plot, 9/10.
Fantasy · TheDragon1231
Such a wide range of word usage, definitely an writer to take note of. Personally love how the characters are unfolded in front of me. Absolute page turner of a book. 10/10.
Eastern · bababkchod
Love the nostalgic family and the plot for this book. The world is absolutely enthralling. I just had to read the entire thing . 9/10!!! would recommend.
Fantasy · Jovia Ninnicabolla
Absolutely wonderful imagery here. Loved the plays between the girl and her environment. Very inspiring 9/10
ch 0 3 Chapter Three
War · lovehatewriter
Amazing progression, catches you off guard almost. Such a clear translation of ideas at the front half of the book. A nice ride all the way through. 9/10
Teen · Tailrs ink
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!😉😉😉
Dark desire: Getting his revenge
Urban · Emmy_logz2