Ithaca19

Good story, mostly issues with grammar. The story could be a little more flushed out. Otherwise, it's entertaining has decent pacing.

I like this story, but I feel like it's missing something. Maybe it’s because it doesn't feel like the main character is attached to anything or anyone. I've only read about 50 or so chapters in, and I know that's a fraction of what has been written. Maybe the story changes further in. It is a good story though.

I like this story a lot but it kinda feels like its starting to stall. It went from a good development to being all about *** without the ***. Don't get me wrong I like ***, but I would rather not have every chapter be about it. Anyway I hope this story gets back on track or its going to get boring to read.