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Hey Author. I’ve been reading a but and have heaviky enjoyed your fan-fic so far. It’s incredibley interesting and you’ve truly shone some amazing light on the “more than one reincarnator” story. But I just can’t wrap ny head around one scene. What was the point of having the judge try to guess and fail at uncovering how the main character made his sushi? It had no impact om the story whatsoever and added no new elements. Not only did it change absolutely nothing, but it simply made what could have been a simple paragraph into a large fillee chapter. You could even remove this entire chapter, and you wouldn’t see much change from the story at all. You could try to justify this as “giving character to an obscure character”. However, this judge, who we will not at all recall in a few chapters, will mot affact the story in any way possible. In other words, it was just a waste of time. I hope you do not see this as something too negative and have this affect your work. I genuinely enjoy your story and hope to see more (as I read future chapters). Anyways, have a pleasent day, dear author.

It is a fan comic based of an anime game called Genshin Impact. I recommend trying the game out.

I completely understand but I think weapons are extremely unexplored in the Dragon Ball universe. Goku’s powerpoll stopped existing when Raditz came along, and Trunk’s sword can somehow, out of some miracle survive blows from a god who went super sayian. I think you should at least try something with weapons, and if weapons from the system reward isn’t viable, why not try ki weapons? Rosè had an extremely wonderful use of Ki manipulation which could make Ki weapons that could pierce right through super siyan blue Goku without a problem (I’m exaggerating a bit but you get the point) maybe Yamcha could abuse his passive skills by using small Ki weapons to fet the boost from every weapon he has trained in. Like Sword technique lvl 10: 50% attack speed; 60% attack. And then he uses a minature ki spear for another buff like Spear technique lvl 10: 20% of piercing enemy; 10% chance to crit on enemy. And so on. In any case I hope you do well with your story. Have a wonderful day, Author.

Heyo Author, have a banana and know of this news. Whether it shall be joyful or sorrowful is up to you. I bring you news that your novel has been uploaded to a large pirated website called “LightNovelWorld” and updates regularly. I do hope you do not feel disheartened by this news rather, if taken positively, you may say that it brings joy to many. From the comments I have seen so far of your novel, it seems that these readers greatly enjoy your work. I wish you the best of luck, Mister Immortal.

Well I’m surprised too. Honestly, some authors leave their works unfinished. But you, you kept going. I have certainly no idea how but you did. And that is something to be proud about. The fact you are already planning the third arc is great in itself. I only hope that you don’t have another harem member falling in love at first sight again. Well good luck.

Wohoooo! You’re back! I’m so happy to see your back to writing again! Thank you so much for the chapter author!

Author allow me to say this with absolute honesty. Writing everyday kind of… well sucks to be honest. In my experience trying to fill other’s expectations, a reader’s expectation no-less is quite taxing. Take a break when you need it just make sure to tell the readers how long and the reason why. If you’re still feeling pressured then take a moment to focus on something else, think about the story later. Essentially, relax. Although writing can be very fun it can also become something akin to a second job which can sap your joy away so relax. And use Grammerly for grammer and stuff. I see a lot of… questionable grammer in most fanfics and yes, it can be ignored but sometimes improper wording and grammer can be a little immersion breaking. Well anyways, I better stop babbling on have a wonderful day Author. Please enjoy your writing and working with your parents :)

Hey author I’m not sure if you are reading this but your novel is way more popular than you imagine. But there is an issue. On a pirated website called “lightnovelworld” your novel has 17 million views! Every day there are comments about people going through “withdrawls” due to not reading your novel. I hope those comments make your day feel a little bit better. Good work.

No worries the story was immensely enjoyable! I look forward to book 2. Good luck!

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