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This writer is so full of crap I he beat up all the guards in front of the queen why are you dissing my country like this you twat

Sorry about my previous comment, he talked about th bronze point later on. My bad

This is the only book so far out of many books I have read in which the writing style is to the point of dropping the book. The others were because of the world building or stupid mc’s that I dropped them. The only interesting bit is the fact the dudes a dragon which is why i pIckes this up in the first place. I appreciate you writing this book but in my personal opinion it sucks alot

It’s fine if there is a little bit of first person but only first person gets tiring quick and should be reserved for more emotional bits or to add more depth the character occasionally. With the amount in this book It quickly went from I’m interested to I don’t care shut up please.

Bro some points went missing in certain areas like chapter 242 and in chapter 245 he was like if only I had a bronze point! Other than that this book is good so far

Don’t like this book one bit, awful. The continuous inner monologues suck so much completely ruins it