hi! will be checking out the book later, does it connected with this book or not?
ch 257 Emperor Lu
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
I'm looking forward to your updates 鈾ワ笍
ch 257 Emperor Lu
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
your story is really good. the plot is so nice. but you can improve your book by fixing the spelling error and grammar so that readers can understand more. the ending is a bit rush maybe you can change it a little bit, put a situation where yaozhu talk with liya and chap about how their son felt after his parents died in third pov. in that chapter you can tell when yaozhu and liya died and so on. i hope what i commented does not hurt you in any way. this is just my opinion and suggestions, you want to accept it or not, it it is your choice. also can i wish for bonus chapters for yaozhu and liya? pretty please? i need more of their interactions
ch 257 Emperor Lu
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
thank you for the double updates馃挄
ch 138 A missed opportunity 3
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
ch 110 Allies or Enemies 5
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
can you do double update? btw your story is awesome!!
ch 110 Allies or Enemies 5
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
looks like the Ah's is making a move 馃檮馃檮
ch 100 Small Province big problems 2
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
if he reborn, then can he reborn before she died? it's so sad馃槶馃槶
ch 31 She Never Smiled
History 路 Ada_5253
love this馃槏馃槏
ch 18 Young Master He Jian
Urban 路 Ada_5253
If you're not feeling well, you should take a break. Your health is really important. Thank you for writing this lovely story 馃挄
ch 298 The Boy In Yellow
For Our Happier Path
Urban 路 hansora